SCAD X Harbor - Week 7

Feedback

Vi

• Avoid extra lighting in Nuke; try not to rely on lighting adjustments in compositing.

• The droplet reference looks too viscous—use your own reference.

• The motion of the droplet is too linear and continuous—add variation.

• The new Shot 4.5 is not different enough from the previous shots.

  
  

Molly

• Check your HDRI.

• In Shot 4.5, consider letting the drop fall further down the bottle.

• Soften the reflection shapes.

  
  

Emma

• In Shot 5, stripes appear on the cap.

• Faceting is visible at the bottom connection.

  
  

Hailey

• The fluid looks too jelly-like in Shot 4.5.

• The air pocket should be more consistent.

• The lighting cards pass over the bottle too quickly.

• All the flowers are pointing upward—add variation in Shot 5.

• Reflections on the cap appear flat and too white.

Since there wasn't any feedback on my part, my responsibility for this week is to transfer files from Houdini to Maya while our LookDev artist works on the flower shader and lighting.

I'm hoping to get more FX feedback on Shots 2 and 3 as the shader and lighting continue to progress :)